my name is Phoenix. My faourite thing in the hole wide world is my family. Becuase they are realy nice. and i allso love kitens and dogs decause they are so snugly. Im a year 4.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, June 2, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
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2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Greetings Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteGreat work on your first post! I like how you have said that your family is the favourite in the whole wide world! You have shared some great information. Do you own any pets?
- Miss Morgan
Greetings to you too Phoenix!
ReplyDeleteI am sure your family would love to read that they are your favourite thing in the whole wide world! What activities do you love to do with your family. I like going to the beach and going out for lunch with my family.
Mrs McIntyre
Hi my name is from south hornby school Phoennix i like sharks as well at the sea. I like the way that you rote about coved 19. By Ethaniel
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