This week we ar learning about olympic athletes and this is the first woman to compete in the olympic games and i needed to make a olympic athletes profile all about violet waldron and i think i couldve put in more writting if you want to say anything coment down bellow and check out the rest of my blog posts hope you enjoyed bye.
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Hi Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteThank you for uploading this work on to your blog.
I like the way that in your 'About the Champion' section you have added more than one fact about her.
Maybe next time in your interesting facts part you could add more than one fact ☺️
Look forward to reading your next blog post.
Miss Lauder