this week weve been making news reports.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, November 5, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Great work Phoenix. You wrote a good summary of your text. Next time remember to write in your blurb what our learning intention was - we are learning to write a summary of a text - when you post your work on your blog. Try to position your book by your chromebook/camera so that when you are reading your head is up and facing the camera, rather than looking down. I'm looking forward to seeing your second news item when you post it.
ReplyDeleteHi phoenix you wrote a good summary on your text and I love the end it was funny and cool. what gave you a the idea to tell us about yellow wiggle leaveing group? maybe don't keep looking at the script.
ReplyDeletegood job phoenix bye.