I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, December 9, 2021
The taniwha of Porirua harbor
This week we have been retelling the tale of the tanwha of porira harbor and we had to find a intresting way to pubblish it.
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hi phoenix Kobe here
ReplyDeleteI like how you said that the taniwha had 4 wings to help her swim in the water and how she had 5 claws on each foot like how you said that the taniwha wanted to fly but she could not and then how she asked he. bye phoenix