I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, August 31, 2021
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this week are task i had a few tasks and this is one of them comment if you would like to say something
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hi Phoenix
ReplyDeletePerhaps it would be good to tell your readers what we are doing for Reading this week and what text you read on the day you created this. It might be good to describe what your task was - even I am unsure.
Can you please also check for capital letters when you post something on your blog (your title should have capital letters and your blurb has no capital letter at the start or full stop at the end).
Thanks