This week we had a task to make a grathic organiser for Sam Dickson annd i think i could have done better but i finished and this is my finished work what do you think of my work? comment below.
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, August 6, 2021
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Hi Phoenix i like how you did a lot of hard work for this writing work i like how you put lots of detail about Sam Dickson. I like how you put lots about Sam Dickson and what he played for bye.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Phoenix,great work on Sam Dickson. Wasn't it exciting when he came into school. Did he give you any facts to add to your work? I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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